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Raining

May 23, 2010
By shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 175 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis


Snippets of an impending storm peaking
Through the green
Leaves of the oak tree, giving
A sense of
Nothing-good-ever-lasts, and then
Rain drops begin to gently
Tickle my nose and linger
Before rolling down my back.
It’s not what I expected though,
Not the sadness which
Seemed doomed to come.
It’s beautiful,
A cool mist covering
The hills in the distance
While I let the rain
Fall on me and let it
Give me a samll sense of
Peace in my life just for
A few minutes as I walk
In the rain,
Speaking of all that I have in life,
All that I want,
All that I don’t have, yet
Raining just for a little while,
Just while I’m here,
Life tastes good



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on Jun. 18 2010 at 6:20 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 175 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

thanks, and i read your poem it was amazing!!! :)

on Jun. 17 2010 at 8:56 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

This poem is absolutely amazing ! Your great , keep it up ! :)

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