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Needle Heart

May 5, 2010
By RawyaAviva SILVER, Tuolumne, California
RawyaAviva SILVER, Tuolumne, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I wake up every morning determined to change the world and have one heck of a good time . Sometimes this makes planning my day difficult."-E. B. White


Emotions, the invisible thread of life
Stitching the patches of quilt
Heart the twinkling needle
Flashing in and out
Poking itself around
Stitching itself within the quilt
Thread and pull through
Like a small sword, intertwining itself were it has no business being



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on Oct. 12 2010 at 4:18 pm
haventy0uheard PLATINUM, Kings Park, New York
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anytime haha and sure i'll check out your other poems as well!=]

on Oct. 11 2010 at 6:13 pm
RawyaAviva SILVER, Tuolumne, California
9 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I wake up every morning determined to change the world and have one heck of a good time . Sometimes this makes planning my day difficult."-E. B. White

hmm..for some reason I can't find your work:/

on Oct. 11 2010 at 6:08 pm
RawyaAviva SILVER, Tuolumne, California
9 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I wake up every morning determined to change the world and have one heck of a good time . Sometimes this makes planning my day difficult."-E. B. White

thank you:) *goes off to look at your work*..If you like this I have a few more poems up that may you may like:)

on Jul. 22 2010 at 6:43 pm
haventy0uheard PLATINUM, Kings Park, New York
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This is beautiful! I loved your metaphors, and I especially liked the last line =] Check out my work if you want.