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Flawless

May 4, 2010
By chartothalatte GOLD, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
chartothalatte GOLD, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
10 articles 1 photo 62 comments

your scruffy blonde hair
with your bright blue eyes
you might sound flawless
but i know your imperfection

you always have my back
and you don’t tell my secrets
that personality of yours
isn’t one that i might forget

you were my closest friend
and you almost became more
but then we made a mistake
and we were no more

there is still a part of me
that cannot forgive you
a part of me that can’t forget
and cannot accept your apology

but when i ignore that part
the part that tells me no
i know you’re still part of me
and that your still my best friend


The author's comments:
this is about something that happened with my best friend. were past it, but i can't forget it.

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_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jul. 9 2010 at 10:36 am
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

wow that is a great poem 5/5. i hope to check out more of your stuff.

btw-can you check out some of my stuff?


on Jun. 16 2010 at 7:43 pm
chartothalatte GOLD, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
10 articles 1 photo 62 comments
thanks! i will!

on Jun. 16 2010 at 8:00 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

great job!!! this is sooooo good and i would love it if you checked out some of my work!!!!

on Jun. 7 2010 at 8:42 pm
chartothalatte GOLD, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
10 articles 1 photo 62 comments

he's a guy.

read here for a bit more back ground: TeenInk.com/nonfiction/personal_experience/article/217202/Always/


on Jun. 6 2010 at 5:45 pm
wishicoulddeletemyaccount BRONZE, Saint Louis, Missouri
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I'm glad you guys got over it. Best friend fights are the worst. Just out of curiosity, is this best friend a girl or a boy?