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February 16, 2010
By hollyhottell DIAMOND, Redding, California
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poetry is a diary written out loud

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drifting and waiting
you dont have a care
sinking and swimming
like floating on air
like a color rainbow
hidden, but not unseen
its a whole new world
when your under the sea
peaceful and calm
its a wide open space
its the one part of the world
thats still a wonderful place
everythings diffrent
and still beautiful
its a world unruined
not touched by a fool
life all around you
no matter where you look
everything in unison
no rules in a book
friends and enimies
but you survive as one
your dependent on all
that is how life had begun

© Jodie L., Jamaica Estates, NY

The author's comments:
i was just watching a video of the sea. it inspirded me to write this. everything was just so peaceful and beautiful
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