Vampyre | Teen Ink


January 20, 2010
By invisible13 GOLD, Gobles, Michigan
invisible13 GOLD, Gobles, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
there is nothing so common as the wish to be remarkable

Do you see him there, in the woods?
Watch him kill the deer, drink its blood.
He looks up, eyes molten gold.
Feel your heart beat, faster, faster.
Closer, closer he comes, eyes now black.
Suddenly, he’s gone.
Then you feel him, his breath on your neck.
The sweet smell of him fills your senses,
Intoxicating in every way.
You wonder how he did it.
Then you know.
You say the word and all goes black.

The author's comments:
I wrote it because i like mythology and quite a few of htem have references to undead creatures that eat young children or drink human blood.

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on May. 21 2010 at 7:17 am
brown_eyed_beauty, Gobles, Michigan
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wow gr88 imagery. you had me hooked from the first line

on May. 3 2010 at 8:05 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

luvvv it!! awesome jobb. the imagery is gr88. i could see the everything tht waz happening from the beginningg. amazzing

on May. 3 2010 at 1:38 pm
SierraSwagnificent SILVER, Bloomingdale, Michigan
9 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everyone in life is going to hurt you, you just have to find the ones worth suffering for." -Bob Marley

That wuuuuuz da best poem ive ever read

on Jan. 30 2010 at 11:34 am
Bloomindale BRONZE, Bloomingdale, Michigan
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment
Awesome Poem Friend!!!!!

Mrs. V. said...
on Jan. 28 2010 at 2:47 pm
Great job!!