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I wasn’t manufactured: MAG

By Anonymous

a doll for you to hold and bring home,
only to find myself broken, forgotten in the corner of your attic,
wishing you’d remember what I can’t let myself forget ...
that I need to be the one to build the bridge,
or I’ll never get over it, over you - you’re over me,
I’m your unfinished game of Monopoly
abandoned on the living room floor.
Had you not left me here, you wouldn’t be
tripping over me, wondering
if you should have taken the time to
put me away properly,
or if it would have been easier had you
just kept playing with me.




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on May. 9 2018 at 8:09 am
Poetgirl1 PLATINUM, Linesville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
You have made it through 100% of your bad days so far. Keep going.

This is really good. I'm glad I took the time to read this poem. This is amazing and I can relate on many levels. Keep writing and never stop. You have amazing talent.

on Mar. 18 2013 at 7:15 pm
theatregirl PLATINUM, Lathrup Village, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;To thine own self be true,&quot; -from Hamlet, a play by Shakespeare.<br /> &quot;I have sworn on the altar of god eternal hostility against all forms of tyranny over the mind of man.&quot; - Thomas Jefferson

I like it! Keep writing.

Aiden PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 3 2011 at 3:53 pm
Aiden PLATINUM, Vicksburg, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
i am me, that&#039;s all I&#039;ll ever be.

this is really good. to me it feels like it has a double meaning. one-the doll and two- a realshionship gone wrong.

on Mar. 17 2011 at 8:40 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend.&quot;

Amazing. I can relate. I love the flow, not in ryme but in truth and feeling.

McHale BRONZE said...
on Dec. 14 2010 at 10:02 pm
McHale BRONZE, Sidney, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
Life has its ups and downs but no matter what always look forward and to the bright side.

I really like this one... it explains a lot about how i feel sometimes... Good job...

Eilatan GOLD said...
on Jun. 24 2010 at 5:25 pm
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Nobody is normal. Everybody in the world is a weirdo freak. Except you, which makes you a weirdo freak.&quot;

THis is like a music box in its sonic dissonance.

on Feb. 9 2010 at 8:22 pm
this is the first time anyone has been able to sum up my feelings into a poem. your analogies are perfect and the piece is just great. adding it to favorites :)

on Apr. 12 2009 at 3:20 pm
Beccaaaa BRONZE, Cambridge, Other
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that is really good :)

a lot of teenagers can relate to it too

good job (y)

on Apr. 7 2009 at 8:26 pm
fauxvalintine</3 BRONZE, Lenoir City, Tennessee
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Wow that was really sad and exactly how I fell right now. great poem. <3