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Derailed

December 20, 2009
By Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments

It hurts an won’t stop
I am feeling the pain
Try to push it away
Gripped tight
I am choking here
I am hurting
Now I am crying
It is taking my breath
I struggle for air
Hands are up in the wind
Come and take me away
All will be saved
Hold me tight
I fly
I am free
Soaring and feeling
Seeing the world
It used to fly past
I got nothing but a glimpse
Now time is slow
I am not in a rush
For I have no pain
The first time I feel happy


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on May. 1 2010 at 4:46 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

sure-five stars for you buddy.

on May. 1 2010 at 3:18 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
thanks a lot :) thanks for commenting on my work it helps me get more inspired :)

on Apr. 26 2010 at 8:50 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

I like this one. the first part sounds like you're dying but theres some guy watching t.v. with headphones on so he doesnt know you're dying so you have to update him on your pain and suffering. thats why I like your stuff.

on Jan. 15 2010 at 4:30 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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Awww thanks that is so sweet

on Jan. 15 2010 at 4:29 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
thank you so much :)

on Jan. 14 2010 at 2:28 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

on Jan. 11 2010 at 1:44 pm
pyropoet DIAMOND, Zimmerman, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
You are NEVER alone in your troubles - there is someone who is always willing to lend a hand or a shoulder to you.
-L. Kimpton

this is incredible. i can completely relate to how you were feeling when this was written. keep up the amazing work!!