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Black Magic.

December 14, 2009
By anna_nhi37 SILVER, Roseville, California
anna_nhi37 SILVER, Roseville, California
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Did you pull
The thin red strings
Joining our wrists
Together
So as to lead me down
A velvety black
Rabbit hole?
Was it easy
For you to lie
Through your teeth
Knowing that all our
Laughter and secrets and trust
Were a mockery of what
You'll never know?
Is it even possibly
Possible
That you could even
Be capable
Of possessing something
So beautiful
That it could never live or die nor grow?


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on Jan. 15 2010 at 6:05 pm
anna_nhi37 SILVER, Roseville, California
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thank you so much for your feedback;)

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on Jan. 15 2010 at 4:46 pm
KatEbby SILVER, North Andover, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Anyone who says they have only one life to live must not know how to read a book.

I like the imagery of the beginning of this poem, but I am not quite sure what the last line means. By the way I like your reference to Alice in Wonderland, it really grounds the poem for me.

on Jan. 14 2010 at 2:43 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx