Comfort | Teen Ink


October 11, 2009
By Sapphire_Marie GOLD, Red Lion, Pennsylvania
Sapphire_Marie GOLD, Red Lion, Pennsylvania
10 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"speak your mind even if your voice shakes"

barely hanging on
wishing for an esacpe
this slow pain killing me
every rip at my heart
makes me wish for an end
one i shall not find
i am meant to live in pain
this i am sure of
the sun shines through my window
landing on my face
its warmth is comforting
the only comfort I know

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on Nov. 7 2009 at 10:41 am
SagaLiSela PLATINUM, Boonsboro, Maryland
27 articles 27 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you."

Simple as that.

Or not that simple.

The emotion in this piece! Awesome.

I'm guessing the lack of puncuation was on purpose, which suits this piece well.

A very unique, and genius shift at the end of the poem.

on Nov. 3 2009 at 7:38 am
Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"peace on earth"

this is really good and deep i like it alot keep up the good work and if u want check out my work and let me know waqt u think