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Hurt Me

September 28, 2009
By LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You don't know what you got till it's gone."


If you could see,
What you do to me
you'd understand why I cry these tears,
and shake terribly from all my fears.

I don't want to loose you
But, you make it to where I have to go
so far from this place
so I can't see your face
with your fake little smile
I'll be gone for quite a while.

You said you loved me.
Why did you lie?
Was it that hard?
You said we'd be together,
forever.

Baby, I f***ing love you
but your just the same.
You play this like it's a game
I'm real
I have feelings
and a heart
that you stole from the start
and now we have to be miles apart.

I won't blame it on myself
I won't let it tear me to pieces.
Yes, I'll cry
Yes I'll beg, pray, and plead to die.
But, I'll always be thinking of you
and this you already know
So, from here on
I'll let you go.


The author's comments:
I wrote this about an ex boyfriend I never totally got over.

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on Oct. 15 2009 at 7:42 pm
LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You don't know what you got till it's gone."

Your welcome hun :)

i like our stuff alot

on Oct. 12 2009 at 10:10 pm
Free.The.Poison PLATINUM, Hanford, California
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Favorite Quote:
Even in our Darkest hour, we must always remember never to spare.

I agree with everyone else who wrote "strong and emotionfil". That is the way I see it. Good job, and I thank you for the nice comments you left me.

on Oct. 11 2009 at 3:38 pm
LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You don't know what you got till it's gone."

Thanks hun :)

taylorrr GOLD said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 9:08 pm
taylorrr GOLD, Fremont, Nebraska
11 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself. Life is about creating yourself.

i loveee it...i totally understand how you got the inspiration

on Oct. 10 2009 at 6:13 pm
blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
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amazing poem :) very weell written. lots of emotion. liek the rhyming scheme.

on Oct. 9 2009 at 10:23 pm
LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You don't know what you got till it's gone."

thank u :)

on Oct. 9 2009 at 10:22 pm
LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You don't know what you got till it's gone."

Aw thanks hun

rengeki SILVER said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 1:11 pm
rengeki SILVER, Carrollton, Ohio
5 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
My past haunts my mind,
My present haunts my body,
And my future lingers in my grave,

yea i understand completely i just went through it, but anyways it nice

on Oct. 8 2009 at 9:01 pm
PoetryinMotion329 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
2 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
(This is my own quote) " Poetry is a portal into ones mind. An escape from reality. And in this escape we find bliss and understanding...We find ourselves"...

Very strong poetry.. I feel where ur coming from. Ur words formed a train straight to my heart. Inspiring...

Mizotron GOLD said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 8:55 pm
Mizotron GOLD, Ashburn, Virginia
12 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Writing is not just something to do, its what I am, and what i feel i should be, and thats how it should feel when you know you want to be a writer.
~Kimberly Lynn

Omg that was sooo good :) keep going ur doin great