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September 3, 2009
By JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

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You said you would "always" be there for me.
You said I was "beautiful". You said I was the "best thing" that ever happend to you.
You said you "loved" me.
You said you "cared".
Why did you lie?

© Stephanie F., Richmond Hill, ON, Canada

The author's comments:
I know this sucks but i just wrote the fisrt thing that came into my head. please comment even if you say it sucks.. ty :-)
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JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 8:36 am
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

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Thank You Very Much!
shelterisland GOLD said...
on Mar. 20 2010 at 8:15 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
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i thought this was pretty good. it didn't suck at all! :)
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 22 2009 at 5:47 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

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Thank You! I am going to check out "you Say" right now :)
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 22 2009 at 5:45 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

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Thank You very much :) ! I am working on more longer less suckinsh ones.
choirchic101 SILVER said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 8:27 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
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it was amazing. i wrote something similar. its calledd You Say. you should check it out. it didn't suck. it was good for the first thing that came to your head.
JenniferB. SILVER said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 1:30 pm
JenniferB. SILVER, Harvey, Louisiana
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This doesn't suck at all, honestly, it was short, sweet, and to the point you expressed your true feelings