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Big Mouth, little words MAG

July 1, 2009
By Joanna Loewenstein BRONZE, Ridgewood, New Jersey
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Inevermetsomeone
Whocouldtalksofast
Andsaynexttonothing
Insuchanurgentmanner.

I NEVER MET SOMEONE
WHO COULD TALK SO LOUD
AND YET SPEAK SO SOFTLY
I COULD BARELY HEAR.

I … like … never … um … met … ­someone …
who … could … uh … think … so … much …
and … like … say … hmm … so … little …
that … I … er … saw … no … point … to … it …

!!!I!!!never!!!met!!!someone!!!
?who?could?use?tons?of?punctuation?
!?and!?express!?no!?emotion!?
… it … sounded … like … m-o-n-o-t-o-n-e …

I never met someone
who could fake it so well
and fail so miserably
that I stopped believing.

DidYOUum!!!hear

that?

© Willow L., Nevada, IA

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Risible SILVER said...
on Sep. 22 2011 at 4:34 pm
Risible SILVER, Norwalk, Connecticut
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It's making fun of how teenagers talk and write, and exposing how with all the talk, not much actually gets said. It's also exposing someone that hides behind all that talk with lies and empty words. Sorry Joanna L. I love the poem and felt the need to respond! :) Apologies, and correct me, if that's not right! 
Mrs.parez said...
on Sep. 22 2011 at 1:12 pm
i dont get it
Laura_Oliver GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 6:39 pm
Laura_Oliver GOLD, Manchester, Connecticut
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This is a nice, fun poem. DidYOUum!!!hear that? I certainly did!
Angie.Hudak GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 1:01 pm
Angie.Hudak GOLD, Doylestown, Pennsylvania
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I'm in love with this! The poem is creative and uses other things than words to get a point across :) I'd love to see more poetry like this!
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 5:54 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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CREATIVITY ALERTNESS!!
lovetildeath GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 1:49 am
lovetildeath GOLD, Virginia Beach, Virginia
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I like how the different forms of pnctuation t makes the flow of the poem easier to read.Good work and ikts qite original.
Kat4ever333 GOLD said...
on Jun. 26 2011 at 7:32 pm
Kat4ever333 GOLD, Orange, California
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its unique and beautiful
HaydenStancil BRONZE said...
on Jun. 26 2011 at 3:54 pm
HaydenStancil BRONZE, Lake City, Florida
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The part where it's all caps, made me yell it in my head. Which gave me a headache.

 

Great poem though!:D

cassxxx8 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 8 2011 at 1:09 pm
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this was interesting to read
emilllydubinn SILVER said...
on Jan. 1 2011 at 10:44 pm
emilllydubinn SILVER, Marlboro, New Jersey
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Hmm...this is very interesting style!
tsa502 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 1:46 pm
tsa502 BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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This is a well written poem. It has a lot of creativity to it. This poem uses different types of words to make the poem flow easier. The last stanza is all my favorite. "I never met someone/who could fake it so well/and fail so miserably/that I stopped believing. This stanza could be used to describe many people and their situation in the world today.
Amnoona BRONZE said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 4:50 pm
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Very creative! A well-written poem with a nice iambic-pentameter.

Welldone. This is fabulous!

Suhyoon BRONZE said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 3:42 am
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Amazing rhythm and voice!

You make excellent use of irregular spacing and punctuation to achieve this effect.

A clear message too :)

 

savagivity777 said...
on May. 26 2010 at 1:18 pm
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While the creative approach is pleasing at first read through, it lacks the sort of depth that would cause me to read this again, and again. Other than that, Phillip is pleased.
BiancaMarie SILVER said...
on May. 26 2010 at 10:39 am
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i like itttt!

 

awesomeman123 SILVER said...
on May. 4 2010 at 10:39 pm
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uhh i get it, i'm still a little hazy on the point of writing this. but overall, great poem!
Destinyschool6 said...
on Apr. 20 2010 at 8:20 pm
Omg awesome poem it was so creative and i can not wait to turn it in as my language arts homework on monday. The assignment was to find an awesome poem that you thaught was original and something you have never seen before this one totally won.
Literalist17 SILVER said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 10:07 am
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wow, i really liked this, very nicely done.
nvrxexistedx2xu GOLD said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 8:32 am
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I really like this!
LovelyMiss GOLD said...
on Apr. 10 2010 at 7:33 pm
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wow this was really creative i loved it!!