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Three Moons edited

September 25, 2021
By SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]


Three Moons

The first moon is silver. 

The second is gold. 

The third moon is reflections and fog and trying to see. 

 

The first moon is truth.

The second is trust.

The third moon is lying and regretting and remembered promises gone wrong.

 

The first moon is changing.

The second is caring.

The third moon is heartbreak and healing and reaching over divides.

 

The first moon is safety.

The second is yearning.

The third moon is freedom and fleeing and lost leaves on the wind.

 

The first moon is memorable.

The second is unforgettable.

The third moon is memories and forgetting and trinkets on dusty shelves.


The author's comments:

this is unrecognizably different, but I'm way prouder. 

apparently, autocorrect doesn't approve of abstract concepts.


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on Oct. 2 2021 at 10:33 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

whoa i havnt heard of that
i commented on your new status on one of your poems. its really not that diffrent after the clouds settle.

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Sep. 27 2021 at 7:47 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
148 articles 41 photos 1014 comments

Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.
--me

Hey Sparrow! I'm so excited I passed the 100 mark and became Elite yesterday! For a long time, you were the only Elite person I found on this site. How does the air feel up there? There was one user from years ago who had over a thousand articles, and what's more, it looked like dozens of them ended up in the mag. What was he, a professional in disguise or something?? It took so long to get this far, I can't imagine getting to one thousand and I write all the time. Some people just be crazy.

on Sep. 27 2021 at 9:20 am
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

thx!

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Sep. 27 2021 at 9:04 am
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
148 articles 41 photos 1014 comments

Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.
--me

Loveable!!