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Three Moons

September 5, 2021
By SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]


The first moon is silver. 

The second is gold. 

The third moon is of mist and smoke and shining lights. 

The first moon is treasure.

The second is priceless.

The third moon is dew on cobwebs and lamplight on wet streets.

The first moon is joy.

The second is love.

The third moon is heartbreak and smiles and laughter in graveyards.

The first moon is healing.

The second is empathy.

The third moon is fleeing and loving and lost leaves in the wind.

The first moon is truth.

The second is wisdom.

The third is lies and imagination and truer than life.


The author's comments:

this really reminds me of LydiaQs poems. maybe the third moon is her.


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on Sep. 25 2021 at 10:16 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

oh my wow this hardly resembles the edited version!

on Sep. 8 2021 at 1:44 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

my picky english teache liked it too.

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Sep. 7 2021 at 10:46 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
153 articles 41 photos 1019 comments

Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.
--me

OH MY GOODNESS! Thank you so much so much I get it now...thank you so much. I'm gonna print this out:)