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Parting Kiss MAG

By Anonymous

     In this last
desperate moment,
I scramble
to retrieve
the only thing
at home
worth caring about.




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i love this so much!

on Jul. 13 2014 at 10:00 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

This is wonderful I think! ^_^ keep on! Cheering for you! I loved how in your poem it was rather a scramble at first, but then at the end it all made snese to me! Beautiful poem, just like you are my dear! ^_^

on Jul. 13 2014 at 4:34 pm
elycavill SILVER, Samobor, Other
5 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Leave nothing but footprints,<br /> Take nothing but pictures,<br /> Kill nothing but time.

It is really interesting, beautiful job.

on Sep. 6 2013 at 1:16 am
TheSkyOwesMeRain GOLD, Irvine, California
13 articles 1 photo 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn&#039;t measured by the number of breaths you take, but by the moments which take your breath away.<br /> <br /> You are only as strong as your weakest link.

Beautiful poem! 

Deviant GOLD said...
on Feb. 20 2009 at 1:22 am
Deviant GOLD, Sebring, Florida
18 articles 1 photo 6 comments
Okay this may be crazy simple, but it is really good, and actually, which this has never happened, stopped my breath. i know that feeling, and for a brief, yet emotional moment, it brought back all of those memories!!!!!!!!! you have talent. I mean, anyone that can portray that much emotioin in such a few words, has something going for them!