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Crying

August 5, 2020
By FirstSteps5000 SILVER, Bethesda, Maryland
FirstSteps5000 SILVER, Bethesda, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"If you reach for the stars, you'll just get the stars. Reach for the heavens and you get the stars thrown in." - unknown
"These aren't just stories,"... …"They're whole kingdoms. They're worlds. They're perspectives and opinions you can't offer, from lives you haven't lived." - The Isle of the Lost
"When someone does something hurtful, they have to admit it... [t]hen they have to be punished for it. And maybe then, if they apologize and change, maybe -maybe- *then* they get forgiven." - The One and Only Bob


Tears come

When you fall

Tears come from joy

Tears are necessary and

Vital

Some people cry when they are hurt

Others,

Others when sorrow and

Disparity take hold,

Take hold of you

Crying 


The author's comments:

I wrote this piece a long time ago when I first got into poetry. I would love to get some feedback, but is you have any critisism, please make it contructive.


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Afra DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 26 at 1:01 pm
Afra DIAMOND, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"You can’t ask other people to believe you and vote for you if you don’t back yourself."
-Jacinda Ardern-

"If I can make someone's day brighter, happier, better, that makes me happier."
-Ava Max-

"A writer must never be short of ideas."
-Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

"A Bridge Has Two Sides."
-Elsa- (Fictional character- Frozen)

“I knew who I was as a girl but I had to find who I was as a woman.”
-Delta Goodrem-

Wow!!! Good work getting your first poem on editor's choice...It deserves this...👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻