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Forgetting you

October 11, 2018
By Moesah BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
Moesah BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
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Forgetting you

Your bittersweet kisses

Make me forget

The worse is gone

When I am with you, I'm at my highest

When you’re gone I feel my lowest

Loving you will kill me yet,

I can’t stop

I know having you stay is a hidden sin

But I think of you every day

Your smile entices me

Your eyes invite me

Your laugh excites me

Your cries break me

Hurting you was not planned, but loving you was

I wish I could take it back

Feel your touch

But you are my past

And someone else’s future

You are not mine

And I need to forget you


The author's comments:

This piece was inspired by my broken heart... 


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Ashneuling said...
on May. 7 at 12:13 am
Ashneuling, Scottsburg, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
When you spend so much time in darkness, you find that the darkness begins to stare back. ~ Sarah J, mass

The amount of pure raw emotion that was put into this was beautiful. Its relatable but so personal all at the same time, just magnificent. 💕

give_orange said...
on May. 3 at 10:22 am
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"Cool picture bro"

mi_voz BRONZE said...
on Apr. 2 at 10:25 pm
mi_voz BRONZE, Cleveland, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
“If they don't give you a seat at the table, bring a folding chair.”
- Shirley Chisholm -
This quote brings depth to the fact that not everything will turn out how you expect it, and sometimes when that happens, lying down isn't your only option, make yourself an opportunity instead of waiting for somebody to hand it to you, I think that really speaks to how I aspire to be ♥ ♥ ♥

this is so powerful, you are such a talented writer ♥

on Jan. 25 at 11:03 am
princessmary GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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*crying felt asf*

on Nov. 1 2023 at 3:25 pm
Self-Scarred BRONZE, Temecula, California
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*crying* This is amazing!

on Oct. 30 2023 at 6:31 pm
norwoodi BRONZE, Olympia, Washington
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Dangggg, that was good. Keep it up.

on Oct. 24 2023 at 2:38 pm
kendal_kelly SILVER, Austin, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
It doesn't matter who you are it only matters what you do -sam winchester

Omg this is so deep I love it!

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on Sep. 24 2023 at 3:04 am
ashiii BRONZE, Khandwa, Other
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Value yourself and make others feel valuable too!!
Cut off people who don't support your growth!!

Great article!! Your work is really relatable.

Gomiss said...
on Sep. 23 2023 at 7:19 am
Gomiss, New Taipei City, Other
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this poem has no rhyme, so it's great.

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on Mar. 16 2023 at 11:06 am
Jacobh14181, Newaygo, Michigan
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jg2w-pi

Sunshine191 said...
on Mar. 10 2023 at 2:07 pm
Sunshine191, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
" When they go low, We go high"
Michelle Obama

This is amazing! Ik how you feel and it sucks. I hope you feel better soon>3

on Feb. 14 2023 at 9:11 pm
foreverandeverandmorever SILVER, Mount Pleasant, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"A girl should be a butterfly. Pretty to see, but hard to catch,"
Don't know who wrote this.

This was amazing. I understand how you feel.

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on Jan. 20 2023 at 1:42 pm
malo BRONZE, Chandler, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"it's me. hi! i'm the problem,it's me"
-taylor swift-

i do relate to u. just wow

on Jan. 13 2023 at 9:07 pm
NerdieBirdie09 BRONZE, Heath, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Light thinks it travels faster than anything, but it is wrong. No matter how fast light travels, it finds the darkness has always got there first, and is waiting for it." -Terry Pratchett

Art, man. This is art, and I applaud you.

Pen BRONZE said...
on Dec. 14 2022 at 5:19 pm
Pen BRONZE, Glendive, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
"My true love hath my heart, and I have his" - Sir Philip Sidney

crying

Loggy_Soup said...
on Nov. 9 2022 at 10:55 am
Loggy_Soup, Bryan, Texas
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I really relate to you and the meaning of the poem. It's such great work!

on Oct. 28 2022 at 5:30 pm
Lolarosemary1 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Somedays I need the music & somedays I need the lyrics." - Author Unknown

This is so amazing. I can really feel that. I can feel your pain.

on May. 9 2022 at 11:12 am
nataliebeal0605 BRONZE, Commercial Point, Ohio
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This poem is really freaking good! It definitely hit home but I love your poem.

Zayy said...
on May. 8 2022 at 10:24 am
Zayy, Montgomery, Alabama
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why did you write like this

on May. 6 2022 at 12:10 pm
Christine001 BRONZE, Xi'an, Other
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I love this part the most
'Your smile entices me
Your eyes invite me
Your laugh excites me
Your cries break me
Hurting you was not planned, but loving you was'
and also this
'But you are my past
And someone else’s future
You are not mine
And I need to forget you'
OMG it is soooooo cute!!!