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Never Again

September 12, 2018
By coco2121 BRONZE, Rolla, Missouri
coco2121 BRONZE, Rolla, Missouri
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My goal this weekend is to move only enough so people know i'm not dead. 😜



Jessica and I stab the ends of our paddle into the river.

Left, right, left, right.

With the current’s guidance, we float down the clear, cold river.


A mustard yellow blur enters the sight of my peripheral vision-

Jessica’s Frito bag.

She begins to to steer towards the piece of trash

next to the the bluffs.

“ No paddle the other way, we are going to smash into the rocks!” I shriek.

She doesn't listen.


I try my hardest to steer the boat in the opposite direction,

but my noodle arms don’t cooperate.

Does she want to hit the wall of stone?

The rapids fill the pack with water,

which propel the bag bobbing by our kayak.

Jessica snatches the bag from the stream.


BANG!


We hit the edge of built up rubble

and spin backwards.

The kayak starts to sway and my heart starts to flutter.

We are going to flip.

I steady my weight in the middle as

Jessica giggles, and I roll my eyes.


“Left, left, right” I bellow in attempt to turn around.

“ No it’s right, left, right!” Jessica argues.

We paddle our own ways,

and we drive into the shallow rocks.

The bank of pebbles pauses our journey down the long, river.


Now, we are behind the others.

My stomach howls, and my head aches from commands.

Never again will I ride in a kayak with Jessica Pritchett.


The author's comments:

During summer, my friends and I went to the river for one of the girls birthday. I rode with one of my best friends and the trip had lots of argueing , hitting the rock wall. So I wrote a poem about it. 


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on May. 14 2019 at 11:37 am
meuschy10 BRONZE, Rolla, Missouri
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happy that jess wanted to pick it up

on May. 14 2019 at 11:37 am
meuschy10 BRONZE, Rolla, Missouri
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shame on you coco2121!!!!!!!!!!!

on May. 14 2019 at 11:35 am
meuschy10 BRONZE, Rolla, Missouri
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that was so fun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on May. 14 2019 at 11:35 am
Racingtothefinish BRONZE, Rolla, Missouri
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Save the rivers! one less piece of trash is one more fish saved!

on May. 14 2019 at 11:35 am
meuschy10 BRONZE, Rolla, Missouri
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lol love this

on Feb. 27 2019 at 11:30 am
Racingtothefinish BRONZE, Rolla, Missouri
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-Plato

great use of onomatopoeia