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Dancing

July 14, 2011
By ApolloSun PLATINUM, Evanston, Illinois
ApolloSun PLATINUM, Evanston, Illinois
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The wind was dancing
A wild ballet
Dancing to music
That never did play

Dancing on toes
That weren’t really there
Dancing for an audience
That just didn’t care

As graceful as birds
As haunting as night
Dancing under clouds
Dancing out of sight


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on Jul. 19 2011 at 8:39 pm
ApolloSun PLATINUM, Evanston, Illinois
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Thanks! I was thinking of the cartoon wind that's grey and swirls around.... and my friend who's a really good dancer! (:

on Jul. 19 2011 at 6:43 pm
singingwriter14 BRONZE, Chester, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Some days you're the statue. Some days you're the pigeon."

I really liked the personification in this poem. Now that I think about, the wind does kind of dance...Haha. Good job! :-)