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Blue gives way to blue MAG

February 20, 2011
By Laurenjeannette SILVER, San Rafael, California
Laurenjeannette SILVER, San Rafael, California
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On the crest of the coast
where they drag teal sheets
they set upon the sand
with rolled up denim knees

In the cooler, cobalt cola cans
sit nestled in the ice
for thirsty little swimmers
who've salt stuck in their eyes

Between navy painted toes
the sand grains congregate
as she gazes eyes across
a sea of dancing slate

Azure turns to diamond
when the sun descends upon the view
and all the girl can see for miles
is blue give way to blue



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on Apr. 21 2011 at 11:54 am
Writer4Life_21 SILVER, No Where, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"If you don't know where your going, you will end up someplace else." - Yogi Bera

I love this so much! Great imagery and word choice! The theme was very creative and calming. Thank you for writing this! Keep up the good work! 

ps. if you don't mind, could you take a look at some of my work...thank you :)