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all the lies and pain

March 5, 2010
By Ashlen BRONZE, Gibsonville, North Carolina
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Ashlen BRONZE, Gibsonville, North Carolina
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your boyfriend likes you but i&#039;m his favorite<br /> i don&#039;t do mornings<br /> hey yall!, was up?

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i always stopped and asked my self
why i fell for you
when you went and broke my heart
even though you said you love me 2
i hate how badly i miss you
i hate how badly i care
i hate that all you really do
is simply stand and stare
you say you really love me
you say you don't pretend
So why is all you tell me
all of it just depends
On how much you relly love her
Can i ask you was she worth it?
What's the point anymore
You don't really give a s***!
You say you relly love me
You say you relly care
So why is all you do
Is simply stand and stare

© Amanda P., Clermont, FL

The author's comments:
this piece of poetry was based on the fact that my boyfriend cheated on me and broke my heart. I still haven't healed but i have moved on. I really loved him and i believed all the lies he told me. I got so insecure after he cheated that i dumped him. I got a new boyfriend and he helped me through it. Reassuring me that he loves me way too much to ever cheat or dump me. He is the sweetest thing and i thank god that i just might have found the perfect guy!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ashlen BRONZE said...
on May. 8 2010 at 5:55 pm
Ashlen BRONZE, Gibsonville, North Carolina
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your boyfriend likes you but i&#039;m his favorite<br /> i don&#039;t do mornings<br /> hey yall!, was up?

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thanks so much i think i have given up on writing poems though. After the pain i went through with the guy i thought was perfect i don't think i could ever write again. He made me choose between writing and him and i chose him and then he dumped me and went out with my best friend so i think i'm giving up on writing
TabbyIsland BRONZE said...
on Mar. 24 2010 at 7:24 pm
TabbyIsland BRONZE, Augusta, Georgia
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Tears are safety valves for the heart when too much pressure is laid upon it. (I don&#039;t remember who wrote that, but I LOVE it!)

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Your poem is really strong and while reading it I could feel the emotion you put into it. It's really good!!!