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December 17, 2009
By JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
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JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
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"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge

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it was raining hard
that late december
though long ago
we still remember...

she closed her eyes
she started to weep
he had failed to love her
she had loved too deep
she ran to him
he turned away
he had chosen to leave
she begged him to stay
she had told him the truth
he fed her dark lies
his love only imagined
her love simply denied
when she opened her eyes
she closed up her heart
then she too hold of his
and she ripped it apart

you may think it violent
extreamly so
but you werent there
youll never know

© Yisrawayl G., Philadelphia, PA

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this poem is about love and rejection i hope everyone who can
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Fungi-Portal SILVER said...
on Jul. 3 2010 at 10:39 pm
Fungi-Portal SILVER, Montreal, Other
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Do or do not. There is no try.
-Master Yoda

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wow, this is great :)

I really like this. it flows really nicely and it's very emotive. kudos.

JustAlice. SILVER said...
on Jun. 13 2010 at 2:21 pm
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge

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thanks! i like to leave out thing to make room for imagination. i submitted two more about a week ago they should be through any day now.
Allykattz PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 13 2010 at 8:38 am
Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
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"This much I know is true That God blessed the broken road That led me straight to you"-Rascal Flatts

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very emotional piece, its almost like your telling the end of a story but leaving out the middle and it makes it full of mystery. love it!
JustAlice. SILVER said...
on Jun. 6 2010 at 3:17 pm
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge

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thank you i was inspired by a book. im glad you like it!
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Jun. 6 2010 at 2:15 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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"when she opened her eyes
she closed up her heart" i liked those lines! that was a really really good poem
JustAlice. SILVER said...
on Apr. 6 2010 at 1:41 pm
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
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"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge

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thank you very much. yeah i didnt really understand <3JuxxMeeh<3
Blondiee BRONZE said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 7:30 pm
Blondiee BRONZE, Beaumont, Texas
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wow. This is so amazing. I just found it in my favorites. I love it. and ignore <3juxxmeeh<3 she's my friend haha. 
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 6:13 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
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"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

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I remember reading this before. I never told you how it made me felt. I love it, I think it reminds me a lot of what happened, but no one was there so they'll never know...
JustAlice. SILVER said...
on Jan. 15 2010 at 4:26 pm
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
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"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge

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thanks.i think?
JustMeAriee BRONZE said...
on Jan. 15 2010 at 9:13 am
JustMeAriee BRONZE, Beaumont, Texas
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"If your looking for love and its staring you in the face then whyy are you questioning it?"

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