Pain | Teen Ink


April 2, 2009
By firstsnowfalls DIAMOND, Marcellus, New York
firstsnowfalls DIAMOND, Marcellus, New York
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Destroying from all angles
I wish i could ease his pain.
But it only gets worse.
when comes the point
that life loses its value?
Life in so much pain is not a life at all.

He is losing the will to live.
Who can blame him?
It is pure selfishness to
force him to endure this suffering
any longer.
I would rather that he go

I'd give anything
for him to have even one minute
without pain.

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on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:45 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

wow. really deep. u can really feel the emotion. awwesome job :))

on Feb. 8 2010 at 9:37 am
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
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this really reminds me of Elphaba and Fiyero from Wicked The Musical...

could you take a look at some of my poems? I'd really appreciate your input.