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Lost and Found

April 5, 2016
By dylanIsSilentlyJudging BRONZE, Suffolk, Virginia
dylanIsSilentlyJudging BRONZE, Suffolk, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The game's afoot!" -Sherlock Homie


The pilot came out from under the fiery wreck,
And unlike his unfortunate crew and plane,
He told himself, “I’m not going to die today.”
Slowly he crawled, as a snake slithers
He retreated to his side’s base
But suddenly, he realized he’d made a grand mistake
As he looked into an armed enemy’s face.
The pilot gulped and prepared for the worst
And then he realized something grand,
That this was his brother, the older, the first.
The brother dropped down his gun and helped the man up
Then, for the first time in years, the pilot saw
His brother, once lost, found again
The brother said, “Let’s not fight. This war is flawed.”
The pilot agreed, and said, “Let’s be friends, for old time’s sake.
C’mon, brother, let’s ditch this hateful disgrace.”



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on Feb. 3 2017 at 7:31 pm
dylanIsSilentlyJudging BRONZE, Suffolk, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The game's afoot!" -Sherlock Homie

Thank you!

on Feb. 1 2017 at 5:24 pm
Sofia_Gonz07 GOLD, San Marcos, CA, California
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This is rlly good

on Sep. 2 2016 at 9:07 pm
dylanIsSilentlyJudging BRONZE, Suffolk, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The game's afoot!" -Sherlock Homie

That could work; let me know if you have any ideas about what crazy things could happen in it

on Sep. 2 2016 at 8:11 pm
RachelPOV. BRONZE, London, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Difficult roads often lead to beautiful destinations

I like this plot twist, well written you should make a story out of this :)

Saturn. BRONZE said...
on Jun. 23 2016 at 9:15 pm
Saturn. BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"The mind is better than the sword"
-Unknown (I'm too lazy to look it up)
"All warfare is based on deception"
-Sun Tzu

Clever... You lure us into a death only to give a twist and end it, all done well, and not messing up the flow. Well Done.

on May. 29 2016 at 3:13 pm
Blackjack. GOLD, Suffolk, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Take a lesson from "the Greatest Man That Ever Lived," Austin Aries. The ambition and vision of one depends on how bad@ss they look in sunglasses." - Me, 2017

"Who is this Jose, and why is he always being denied?" - Corey Graves, 2016

Excellent work, my friend!

on Apr. 6 2016 at 7:40 pm
dylanIsSilentlyJudging BRONZE, Suffolk, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The game's afoot!" -Sherlock Homie

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :D

on Apr. 5 2016 at 8:56 pm
chamomiledernier BRONZE, Cohasset, Massachusetts
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This is amazing. I love both the extended metaphor and the use of dialogue!

on Apr. 5 2016 at 8:50 pm
dylanIsSilentlyJudging BRONZE, Suffolk, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The game's afoot!" -Sherlock Homie

Sorry if you guys thought this was short and/or bad. Let me know what you think!