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Rollercoaster of My Life

October 18, 2008
By e.nadeem PLATINUM, Karachi, Other
e.nadeem PLATINUM, Karachi, Other
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Thrashing uncontrollably
Every vision blurry
Feral air meets me
Its stars I see
Excruciatingly; wildly
Repeating and spiraling
Emptying me of glee
Again; not yet free
Treacherously whirling
Again; will I ever be?
Perilously jolting
Crashing against the blustery
Hitting and slamming
Flooding the sea
Now thrashing and screaming
What’s happening to me?
Pleading; begging
Set me free
Banging with cringe
Vaguely I can see
The end of what I cling
My life letting down uneasy
Still whirling
And revolving
The wind around me
Painfully stinging me
Shrieking and crying
Out in agony
It’s a final ending
Of me
No more bearing
This treachery
And finally
The ride is ending
The bloody strife
The roller coaster of my life
Let’s up the seat
And I am falling
To face
My destiny.

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This article has 2 comments.

Safire L said...
on Nov. 11 2008 at 12:41 am
Another fantastic job. This was so good, I was on edge the whole time waiting for the release, the fall, the climax and the drop in one.

-Good job.

Sumer K. said...
on Oct. 23 2008 at 3:24 pm
Elishba great job! i love the subject and the vocabulary...very talented