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I Love the Way you....

August 28, 2008
By amanda727 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
amanda727 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
33 articles 2 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't let anybody tell you who you are; don't let anyone tell you that you don't deserve what you're willing to work for.
Never give up; you\'ll never know how far you could go until you try to get to where you want to go.

My knees are becoming weak and I am suddenly out of words
It’s like I can’t breathe
Every time our eyes meet, and you walk toward me, I get this feeling
It’s almost more than I can take; it’s almost unbearable to me

I love the way you hold me
I love the way you feel so strong and the way you go all out
I love the way you look at me and the way you try to make me happy
You care about what’s on my mind and what I care about

And when you smile, the room suddenly gets brighter
And I feel like nothing can go wrong
When you smile, everything is okay
And I can forget about all my problems and anything else that’s going on

I love the way you whisper in my ear
Things that only I should hear
Things that make me go weak inside
Everything just feels so right

I love the way you kiss me
Gentle and tender as if to tell me
That you’ll try to make things better, and you’ll never hurt me
That you want me for me

I love the way you hold me close
And you never let go
You never leave me when I need you the most
You’re always there holding me close
Like I matter the most

The author's comments:
I wrote this about falling in love...everyone can relate, no matter how old you are. Everyone who gets to feel that emotion is so lucky because not everyone gets to, and when you feel that, you need to hold on and never let it go.

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This article has 3 comments.

on Mar. 17 2012 at 1:14 am
AnandhuKrishna BRONZE, Quilon, Other
1 article 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do something slightly different from the ordinary.Do it big.It will be the new trend.Create innovation...Make new
--simply me saying

its just marvellous.true feelings..try the feelote literature syle than poetry

twilight97 said...
on Nov. 1 2008 at 3:33 pm
this rocked, amanda! love it!

ashleyt said...
on Aug. 31 2008 at 12:12 am
I love this!