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Broken

September 20, 2012
By bagley777 GOLD, Tucson, Arizona
bagley777 GOLD, Tucson, Arizona
11 articles 3 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is a two way street. If you find yourself on a one-way road, it's time to take the next turn off.


Broken;
Alone and crying,
heartbroken and upset,
You're not the only one with this feeling.
So, forget.



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bagley777 GOLD said...
on Sep. 21 2012 at 9:10 pm
bagley777 GOLD, Tucson, Arizona
11 articles 3 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is a two way street. If you find yourself on a one-way road, it's time to take the next turn off.

  I definitely like longer poems too. I was going for a cinquain type of form, (5 lines, 2 syllables, 4, 6, 8, 2) which is why it's so short. But I didn't do it properly anyway (that dang "so" at the end put me at 1 syllables too many, but it just sounded better with it!) Thanks for the feedback!(:

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Sep. 21 2012 at 8:57 pm
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

If it were just a little bit longer it might have been better. Allthough you did get the point across.