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Miss You

March 19, 2012
By TTTeeSS GOLD, La Porte, Colorado
TTTeeSS GOLD, La Porte, Colorado
17 articles 6 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no such thing as nothing, yet there is such thing as nothing, simply because there is nothing such as nothing.


You’re in a better place
They say
Don’t cry, it’s a disgrace
I loved you, I’ll cry anyway

You left me,
You died
I don’t agree
I cried

Your spot lies open
Your food untouched
My heart is broken
Your toys unbudged

Where did you go
I miss you
6 feet below
I loved you



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Kaili SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2012 at 3:43 pm
Kaili SILVER, Fort Collins, Colorado
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that was a beautiful peom to express something very sad.

on Apr. 12 2012 at 9:48 pm
Allicat001 SILVER, Waukesha, Wisconsin
6 articles 0 photos 170 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love is not someone you can live with, love is someone you can&#039;t live without.&quot; <br /> <br /> &quot;Always stand up for what&#039;s right even if that means you&#039;re standing alone.&quot;

This was amazing!  I loved the way you worked the rhymes in your poem.

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Apr. 1 2012 at 10:21 am
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
17 articles 0 photos 237 comments

Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me &quot;Life is a choice and death is a decision&quot;-Lil Wayne

this is good.

MaddiK BRONZE said...
on Mar. 24 2012 at 3:42 pm
MaddiK BRONZE, Fort Collins, Colorado
4 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;There is no great writing, only great re-writing.&quot;

I love this poem Tess! You did a really good job with invoking emotion in the reader, I sure felt it! I'm really sorry about your cat too. Great poem.