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Exquisite Pain
October 26, 2011
White as snow,
Cold as ice,
His body lays.
On the ground,
In the night,
Nobody knows.
Of the boy,
Who alone,
Cried out in pain.
Lonliness,
And anger,
Overtook him.
Driving him,
To end it.
To end it all.
The tears slid,
Down his cheeks,
Swollen and red.
The beatings,
And abuse,
Too much to bear.
He reached,
For the Knife,
And ran far away.
In darkness,
He fled.
To meet his death.
The pressure,
Of the blade,
Against his skin.
The ribbon,
Of scarlet,
Exquisite pain.
He feels it.
The end,
It's finally here.
He draws in,
His last breath,
Forever asleep.
White as snow,
Cold as ice,
His body lays.
On the ground,
In the night,
Nobody knows.
© Jamie D., Bethesdsa, MD
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DreamInTheRain SILVER said...
on Dec. 14 2011 at 6:05 pm
This is amazing.. Its kind of morbid, which i like. My mind is always morbid in its thoughts... Sometimes they take over me... I really like this poem however... Your words are amazing.
XxMidnightKissxX SILVER said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 8:00 am
Thanks. And no it didn't. It was just my imagination running wild. :)
XxMidnightKissxX SILVER said...
on Nov. 22 2011 at 5:38 pm
Thanks! And no problem. I'd love to check out some of your stuff. :)
sunshine7223 SILVER said...
on Nov. 21 2011 at 11:38 pm
This is really good. :) I love how you used "On the ground, in the night, nobody knows", in the beginning and also used it in your conclusion. This reminds me of something I would write. :) Well done. Very well done. If you wouldn't mind, I'd love if you commented on some of my poems. I haven't had any published yet, but I've posted some in the poetry and lyrics thread. Please and thank you. (: I will return the favor.
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