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Brother vs. Sister

May 22, 2011
By JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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&quot;Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Not all those who wander are lost&quot; --JRR Tolkien<br /> <br /> &quot;When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears.&quot; --Jose&#039; Bergamin

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Shh…
I’m hunting my sister,
Here’s a description of her,
she has fangs and claws,
and scales all over,
I only have a slingshot to defend myself.
Shh…
I’m hunting my brother,
here’s a description of him:
he has 5 ft long fangs,
1 ft long claws,
2 ox horns at the side of his head,
with scales all over…
there he is!
fire!
yuck!
pu!
gag!
Max wins!

© Natalie D., Ames, IA

The author's comments:
I wrote this a few years ago when my baby brother was first born.(one of my two poems about him) Please comment on what you think.
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Helena_Noel BRONZE said...
on Mar. 11 2012 at 11:01 am
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I&#039;d rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I&#039;d rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye&#039;s a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example&#039;s always clear.&rdquo; -Edgar Guest

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Oh, really? It's good! What grade are you in now? Do you have work more recent?
JoPepper PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 9 2012 at 9:59 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Not all those who wander are lost&quot; --JRR Tolkien<br /> <br /> &quot;When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears.&quot; --Jose&#039; Bergamin

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Thank you I wrote this in like 6th grade! :)
Helena_Noel BRONZE said...
on Mar. 4 2012 at 1:50 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I&#039;d rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I&#039;d rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye&#039;s a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example&#039;s always clear.&rdquo; -Edgar Guest

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This is a good one. It reminds me of Silverstien.
Goldenheartbeat SILVER said...
on Oct. 1 2011 at 3:58 pm
Goldenheartbeat SILVER, Murphy, Texas
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You're welcome :)
JoPepper PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 1 2011 at 3:50 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Not all those who wander are lost&quot; --JRR Tolkien<br /> <br /> &quot;When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears.&quot; --Jose&#039; Bergamin

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Thank you !!!!!! :D
Goldenheartbeat SILVER said...
on Oct. 1 2011 at 11:53 am
Goldenheartbeat SILVER, Murphy, Texas
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I really like this! it's interesting and I can just imagine the two little kids sneaking around, imagining their siblings as something they want to attack. I do suggest making more variety in the descriptions of the siblings, but that's it. Good job! :)