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Seasons

June 12, 2010
By Shayna121 GOLD, Port Charlotte, Florida
Shayna121 GOLD, Port Charlotte, Florida
12 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am the master of my fate and the captain of my soul.


Summer sun-
on my skin,
sweltering heat,
held within.
Fall leaves-
drifting down.
Pretty colors
all around.
Winter's here-
snowy days.
Cocoa served
different ways.
Spring time-
fresh air,
flowers, flowers
everywhere!
Seasons
Summer sun-
on my skin,
sweltering heat,
held within.
Fall leaves-
drifting down.
Pretty colors
all around.
Winter's here-
snowy days.
Cocoa served
different ways.
Spring time-
fresh air,
flowers, flowers
everywhere!


The author's comments:
I was inspired to write this while I was sitting under my oak tree. I realized how the seasons just fly by. So I wrote a poem about them. I hope people will learn to appreciate every season, even if it's dreaded, like Winter. There is always something good about the seasons.

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julian GOLD said...
on Jul. 20 2011 at 3:03 pm
julian GOLD, Eugene, Oregon
17 articles 17 photos 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
The goal is not about living forever, the goal is about creating something that can.

Wow, this poem really flows! It's so beautifully written, and very poetic (which is good since its a poem, lol). Nice!

on Jul. 15 2011 at 10:25 pm
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
31 articles 6 photos 577 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

I love this!!! It was so simple, yet I loved the way you did it. It had a definite rhythm to it. It's very good. :)

on Jul. 14 2011 at 8:10 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1646 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

Great poem!  I like how it explains how the seasons just fly by (unless it's winter in Canada!).  Excellent work!