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If I could stop...

March 13, 2010
By starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
11 articles 7 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you're not. It about being who you are and finding someone
who loves every bit of it."

"Life's tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late"


If I could stop one life from ending
I shall reach my goal
If I could give one heart the mending
Or help a poor soul
Or help one bird fly
Unto the big blue sky
I shall reach my goal..


The author's comments:
This poem was adapted from Emily Dickinson, but this piece was written entirely by me. Thank you so much for reading!!!!

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on Jul. 26 2011 at 8:28 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

youre welcome very much. i do love your positvement and upliftness. and i am loving the first line alone my dear.

on Jun. 13 2010 at 11:52 pm
SarahJumps SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Great minds discuss ideas; average minds discuss events; small minds discuss people.
-Eleanor Roosevelt

I think, at a child's birth, if a mother could ask a fairy godmother to endow it with the most useful gift, that gift should be curiosity. -E.R

This is simple but good. i like it 

on Jun. 2 2010 at 8:43 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
11 articles 7 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you're not. It about being who you are and finding someone
who loves every bit of it."

"Life's tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late"

Thanks a lot!!:)

 


on May. 26 2010 at 4:21 pm
forgottenpenname GOLD, Troy, Michigan
12 articles 0 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Carpe diem."

I love it and I love its meaning. Great writing!!