I think this is really cool. I love the different ways you weave the motif of the ocean throughout the piece. obviously this person's crush is like an ocean because he is mysterious like the ocean and he's eyes are blue, but the lines "Each glance, a ripple in the tide,/A silent pull she cannot hide." add another level to the piece because her love for her crush is a current so strong and overwhelming that it is like the moon's pull on the ocean's tide. you also add another level by capturing the limbo between desperately wanting a relationship with a crush but at the same time greatly fearing rejection with the lines "But still, she waits and keeps her place,/Torn between the waves and his embrace." The last two lines are pretty cool with the slant rhyme see/sea. And you did all of this while keeping a rhyme scheme that didn't sound cheesy. Way to go!

Sorry for geeking out. your piece made me really happy.