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Trapped
May 24, 2009
Trapped behind these walls
Closed inside this room
Is a girl who has a secret
Leading to her tomb
Thoughts running through her mind
Pain racing through her veins
Gives her trouble through the night
As the sky begins to rain
These rooms has no windows
No air, she's suffocated
These rooms have no light
The intensity not yet rated
Trapped inside this world
With hearts burning cold
Dawn begins to break
The air brisk and bold
She opens her mouth to speak
You hear not yet a word
For its trapped behind these walls
Isn't it absurd?
© Molly L., Bethesda, MD
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This article has 17 comments.
ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 3:47 pm
wow this is really good work ! I ♥ THIS ! please check and rate my work =]
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 17 2010 at 2:04 pm
omg i luv this. it is amazingg
_TheDarkArtist_ SILVER said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 6:18 pm
This is amazing. its goes deep. keep it up, i will be eager to read more :D
Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 6:04 am
Wow..... I feel exactaly like this.
Chelsea Gallay said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 12:19 am
awesome! i really love it! please keep writing
literaryaddict PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 31 2010 at 6:25 pm
i love love love how you use rhyming in your poems. it really brings a new meaning to them. this one, i think, is my favorite so far
tbkeleli said...
on Dec. 26 2009 at 8:30 pm
ohhh this poem is very intense. and i like the words used as well. they help add to the intensity
Ineedthesuntorise BRONZE said...
on Jun. 13 2009 at 3:28 am
Hey I have no criticism for this poem-it is just too amazing! I love how much emotion you put into it! its soo real and it really connects with me. :)
if you want, you can also check out my poetry too-i love constructive criticism too-but you dont have to read them if you dont want to of course :)
if you want, you can also check out my poetry too-i love constructive criticism too-but you dont have to read them if you dont want to of course :)
MariaMarie DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 2 2009 at 12:28 am
I like how you pool the reader into it by asking the question last- makes them feel what you've just said, to take it in. I like how you tell us about her and not give direct details.
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