SUNBURNT! | Teen Ink


April 28, 2012
By kenzie2014 BRONZE, N/A, Illinois
kenzie2014 BRONZE, N/A, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"But sadly I was born in the era where a 'Good Morning' text is the most romantic gesture ever."


After the year Ronnie's had with family and friendship problems. She falls for a guy that she's liked since sixth grade. But will her fears and personal issues come in between what they have or will it become what they HAD... Ronnie has to get over the fact she cant bring her father back and has to realize that college is just a year away. But when Ronnie's mom comes back into the picture with a new husband and a new family, Ronnie and her brother Jeremy have a huge choice to make...

Kenzie A.


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on May. 2 2012 at 2:56 am
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
2 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The happiest people don't necessarily have the best of everything;
They just make the most of everything they have."

"Today is life. The only life we're sure of. Make the most of today." -CSI:NY

the idea behind your story is great, i love it!

however, it does sound a little hastily written and some of the shorthand draws away from the writing itself. it's also a little difficult to tell who says what sometimes. the grammar needs a little work too (for examples, CAPITALS)

but apart from that it's good and i really liked the idea.