Thanks! I appreciate it!

It was very good!:) But the only thing that bothered me was there was no dialogue and everything went by really fast. But, I'm just one of those people who like dialogue. Good job though!(:

thanks i appreciate the comment and i will whenever i get the chance but the second line was like the definiton of love thats what it was meant to be like :))

i havnt read all of it but so far so good  i do have some critisism  the first chapte especially deffintly needs some touching up as far as word choice and sentance structure  for example, the second line doesnt really make perfect sense  " Love is the feeling that people tend to be affectionate with one another"  i think that line deffintly needs some reworking   as well as just a few other parts of the first chapter   other than that though its pretty good   could you please read and comment on the first chapter or two of my novel A Place Called Heaven its on the third page of most discussed