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The Social Class Beast

January 6, 2011
By Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg


Summary:

Misti was sitting in class one day when KC walked in. He wore black and red, with make-up and piercings. He acted rude and self absorbed. But she never judged a book by the cover before... Forced to work on a class project together, the two teens slowly begin to understand each other and form a relationship.


Vanendra

The Social Class Beast


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on Feb. 19 2011 at 2:12 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1752 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

What publishing company?  What did they say?

 

Sorry, it's just that, I want to make sure it's not a scam--there are too many of those nowadays. =\ Publishing companies don't just contact people about their books unless it's a set-up like inkpop, which is run by HarperCollins.  The way it goes is the author contacts an agent/agents with query letters about their books.  They usually get numerous rejections, but if an agent likes the sound of their query letter, they might request a sample of the book.  If they still like it, they'll probably take you on.  Then the agent goes from there--contacting publishers and working on deals.  But publishing companies almost never just contact someone out of the blue.

 

Sorry about the mini-rant. Haha. You can just read the first two questions. =P


on Feb. 19 2011 at 11:30 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Is this the end?!

on Feb. 19 2011 at 10:58 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

I know but I had to make her life like that to lead up to the epic ending I thought of....Thankyou soooooooo much for reading my book ^-^ :D

on Feb. 19 2011 at 10:54 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Wow. I just read chapter 4. Thats so terrible for her to go through. :( Good writing though!

on Feb. 19 2011 at 10:45 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Lol,i meant to say anger in that last message -.- i need to learn to spell XD Hope you like the rest of the story! ^-^

on Feb. 19 2011 at 10:42 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

You're welcome ^-^ thanks a million for reading it :D

on Feb. 19 2011 at 10:36 am
Parantan BRONZE, Mars, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Giving up doesn't always mean you are weak; sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go.

Yay!!! Thx for sharing your story with all us readers.

on Feb. 19 2011 at 10:25 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

lol im trying my bestest!!!! :) more chapters up by nxt wednesday

on Feb. 19 2011 at 10:21 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Thankyou ^-^ but i didn't like the ninth chapter that much. And the chpter i'm currently trying to write doesn't flow too wellwith the story. :/ but imma keep writing til it sounds just right. :D

on Feb. 18 2011 at 11:38 am
sparkledreamer SILVER, Los Angeles, California
7 articles 5 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There's a lot of things you need to get across this universe. Warp drive... wormhole refractors... You know the thing you need most of all? You need a hand to hold." - The Doctor

So good. though the ninth chapter kinda reminded me of twilight but it is still good. Keep writing! :)

on Feb. 18 2011 at 9:33 am
Parantan BRONZE, Mars, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Giving up doesn't always mean you are weak; sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go.

Sadness Sadness to you not writing anymore of this story. Un-writer's block Zappity Zoo! :(

on Feb. 18 2011 at 8:58 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

new chapters are posted, sorry there aren't any more....I now have writer's block >.<

on Feb. 9 2011 at 8:41 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

lol, im going to add new chapters on friday. I rather add more chapters in a group so you can keep reading. I'm soooo happy you like my story so much.Thank you :D ^-^ <3

on Feb. 9 2011 at 7:34 am
Parantan BRONZE, Mars, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Giving up doesn't always mean you are weak; sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go.

Eeek! I keep re-reading it again and again because i'mm waiting for new chapters lol.

talk about the social life i have when the only thing i do is read stories online, haha.


on Feb. 8 2011 at 2:52 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Oh okay :D I'll comment as I go!

on Feb. 8 2011 at 12:32 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Thanks ^-^ her reaction will seem more realistic as you see that she has built in ager because of her home life.

on Feb. 8 2011 at 11:06 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

I'm reading this a chapter at at time, and it's really good so far :) Intriguing if a tiny bit unrealistic (her reaction seemed extreme, but I guess it could happen :P) Anway, I like it a lot :)

on Feb. 8 2011 at 8:48 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

I actually wrote a poem as an epilogue for this book and its sequel, i just didnt transfer it to my USB yet. I hate school computers -.- lol. I'll think of putting the epilogue in KC's perspective though thank you for the idea. :D ^-^ <3

on Feb. 7 2011 at 7:29 pm
sparkledreamer SILVER, Los Angeles, California
7 articles 5 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There's a lot of things you need to get across this universe. Warp drive... wormhole refractors... You know the thing you need most of all? You need a hand to hold." - The Doctor

I think you might want to do a chapter or an epilogue as to what KC was thinking however it is really good right now so continue writing and think about that for later on.

on Feb. 7 2011 at 9:01 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

I actually found a publishing company thats willing to publish my book despite my age!!!! ^-^ so this book will be coming out sometime next fall....I'll still be posting chapters on here though until I actually get a contract to read :D