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The Social Class Beast

January 6, 2011
By Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg


Summary:

Misti was sitting in class one day when KC walked in. He wore black and red, with make-up and piercings. He acted rude and self absorbed. But she never judged a book by the cover before... Forced to work on a class project together, the two teens slowly begin to understand each other and form a relationship.


Vanendra

The Social Class Beast


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on Feb. 21 2011 at 8:54 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

thank you :D

on Feb. 21 2011 at 2:37 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Thankyou...I didn't think capter nine went with the story either, any suggestions on how I  could fix it?

on Feb. 21 2011 at 2:21 pm
CrazyWriter GOLD, Lorton Station, Virginia
16 articles 2 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Once you have given up on the most important thing in your life, you begin to die, because then, you gradually lose your true self"~Hana Kimi
"Someone who can lie to themself. . . is lonely, and in pain"~Hana Kimi

I think you have a book that could be published here..... I would like  you to post more quickly but take your time at the same time. This is great it has a goood plot sso far and the characters seem to be forming greatly. you have a surprise in everychapter which keeps everyone hookeed keep it up but dont hurry yourself too far. oh and chaptter nine is just alittle  off in flowingness but otherwise i have no compliants.

~CrAzYWrITeR~


on Feb. 21 2011 at 12:08 am
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
8 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
“It is easy to forget how full the world is of people, full to bursting, and each of them imaginable and consistently misimagined.” -John Green, Paper Towns

Ohhh.  Okay.  Welll I can't wait .  Haha It's one of my favorites.

on Feb. 20 2011 at 9:16 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

thankyou I'm glad you can connect to it some way ^-^

on Feb. 20 2011 at 9:13 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

actually the third book doesnt come out until this spring...It's called Forever.

on Feb. 20 2011 at 8:52 pm
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
8 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
“It is easy to forget how full the world is of people, full to bursting, and each of them imaginable and consistently misimagined.” -John Green, Paper Towns

I can't wait to read the next chapters!  =]

And wait- there's a third one out already??  I've only read the first two.  A trip to the bookstore is in order.  Haha


on Feb. 20 2011 at 8:02 pm
drmstarlet21 GOLD, Matthews, North Carolina
13 articles 0 photos 76 comments
This is great! I love it. My school's all-school musical this year is Beauty and the Beast, and I am in the chorus, so it really connected with me. I can't wait to see where you go with it!

on Feb. 20 2011 at 6:15 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

ld love any criticism and advice that you have please tell me. :D

on Feb. 20 2011 at 1:25 pm
sparkledreamer SILVER, Los Angeles, California
7 articles 5 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There's a lot of things you need to get across this universe. Warp drive... wormhole refractors... You know the thing you need most of all? You need a hand to hold." - The Doctor

If you would like any criticism or advice I'd be happy to help. Now you should just keep trying

on Feb. 20 2011 at 9:05 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Oh okay :) I'll keep reading for sure :)

on Feb. 20 2011 at 7:36 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

trilogy* -excuse my spelling errors please lol XD

on Feb. 20 2011 at 7:35 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

the last poem/ chapter I posted is the epilouge to this book. i put it there for those people wo like to look at the last page of a book before reading it. i wont b switching perspectives until the last few chapter of this story... There's a huge reason why......I'll add more chapters on wednesday. Hope you continue to read this book ^-^

on Feb. 20 2011 at 7:27 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Thankyou soooo much, i will post more chapters on wednesday!!!! ^-^ :D

 

P.S. have you read the Shiver trilog yet?


on Feb. 19 2011 at 11:08 pm
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
8 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
“It is easy to forget how full the world is of people, full to bursting, and each of them imaginable and consistently misimagined.” -John Green, Paper Towns

Wow.  This book got me hooked immediately. 

I think the plot seems really great so far.  There are tons of places the story could go, and I'm so excited to see what's next.  Don't stop writing (please)! =]

I love the little poems you put in the chapters.  Some of the chapters, though, seem really short.  (But maybe that's just me complaining because I want to read more. :P) 

Five stars!

P.S.  I love Maggie Stiefvater! =D


on Feb. 19 2011 at 10:34 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

I'm a little confused - are you switching perspectives in the middle of the book? I can see this last chapter being the beginning or end... :P

on Feb. 19 2011 at 4:14 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

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on Feb. 19 2011 at 4:14 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

nofrillsbuffalo

on Feb. 19 2011 at 4:11 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

well my english teacher owns the company so I know its not a scam. he said that so far my storyis pretty good but should finish thebook before submitting it.... I think the company is called Nofrillsbuffalo the website address is as follows.(because editors of this website wont let me add a link)...

on Feb. 19 2011 at 4:03 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

lol, nope not yet...I just put the epilouge in for the ppl who want to get a glimpse at the ending.