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Soul Slayer

July 29, 2011
By headoverheels44 SILVER, Dickerson, Maryland
headoverheels44 SILVER, Dickerson, Maryland
6 articles 0 photos 6 comments


Hope is of a very rare race that is nearly extinct and is very nessesary for the vampire race, since she is the only one who can pass the soul of the first king of the vampires to the next in line. But since she lives with a human family (due to the fact that her late brother left her in the care of his human best friend) it is hard for her to keep the vampires and humans apart. How long can she keep them apart?


Soul Slayer

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on Oct. 22 2011 at 1:30 pm
headoverheels44 SILVER, Dickerson, Maryland
6 articles 0 photos 6 comments
Thank you everyone for the great ratings! I am happy people actually like my writing, since it is my whole world :)

Amster BRONZE said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 6:01 am
Amster BRONZE, Newton Aycliffe, Other
3 articles 6 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be sad that it's over, be happy that it happened

I really enjoyed reading this. I look forward to reading more of your work. ^_^

on Aug. 4 2011 at 2:33 am
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
31 articles 6 photos 577 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

I like the idea of this, though I spotted a few grammatical errors and some run-on sentences, but those are pretty easy to fix. I liked some of your descriptions, and the story itself is very interesting. Good job :)