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Feedback: "The Clean Water Crisis"

February 27, 2017
By vjones0967 BRONZE, Tyngsboro, Massachusetts
vjones0967 BRONZE, Tyngsboro, Massachusetts
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“The Clean Water Crisis” by Lily C. scared me when she said that we could go out of water.  We don’t know when we could run out of water.  We need water to live; it’s important for us.  She writes, “When the well is dry, we know the worth of water.”  It kinda scared me because she’s saying some countries could go out of water and If we keep wasting it and we run out, we’ll know how much we need it.   In my science class, our research shows that some scientists are saying we may have a food crisis or anything could happen, but not happen right now, in a couple of years.  That makes me nervous because we could still be alive.  Or maybe the scientist could be wrong, like Benjamin Franklin was wrong.  Lily did a good job giving evidence and research from specific places.



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