In “A Broken Moon” by Micheco27, I was appalled. It wasn’t a book by any means but it was a long story that was very well written with minimal mistakes. It takes place in New York. A boy is celebrating New Years with his family when an asteroid hits their home and kills his entire family, leaving him to be saved by the homeless man living on their street. The author called him “Crazy Jean.” He was lucky to have been saved considering that the boy’s father called him a bad person and threw stuff at him. His father said, “Get away from there you drugged up idiot!” As Jean was looking through the trash for food. Jean eventually saves the boy and figures at that the asteroid was a chunk of moon, leaving behind “A Broken Moon.” This short story was brilliantly written and I enjoyed reading it. I would highly recommend to all of you suspenseful Sci-Fi lovers.