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February 18, 2015
By Nick.Dudek BRONZE, Highland Village, Texas
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I ascend into my dream,
A loud yell and scream,
The people all surround,
I listen to the sound,
I’m scared beyond belief,
I cannot get relief,
I cannot bear the pain,
The tears pour down like rain.
I am living, I am dead,
But only I’m dreaming, of what’s in my head.

© Chelsea G., Farmington, MN

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Gabbyyirene GOLD said...
on Feb. 20 2015 at 11:49 pm
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This is incredibly beautiful because it is so short and to the point. Also I admire the way you took what your feeling inside and put it to good use. This is a very powerful piece and you should be very proud of yourself.
TheComet PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 20 2015 at 1:49 pm
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So beautiful and poetic! It's rather short yet it carries a strong meaning. I love it ^_^ Keep it up you have a great talent. I already 5 starred it Thank you for sharing this.
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on Feb. 20 2015 at 3:09 am
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Awesome job! Great rhyme and rhythm! You deserve having it be on top voted articles! Congrats!