sonnet 0.3 | Teen Ink

sonnet 0.3

October 20, 2013
By Jezmondinie PLATINUM, Tonbridge, Other
Jezmondinie PLATINUM, Tonbridge, Other
30 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
The world is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper.

Your fuse is short
your temper frayed
when you get mad
we’re all afraid
you’re not polite
somewhat uncouth
and face it dear
beyond on your youth
a stunning looker
you are not
you graceless act
the drunken sot
and yet despite
these many flaws
I’m forever simply yours

The author's comments:
I was in class and we were meant to be studying Shakespeare's sonnet 130. Instead I ended up scribbling this in the back of my book.

Similar Articles


This article has 1 comment.

xG4RY GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2013 at 6:43 pm
xG4RY GOLD, East Falmouth, Massachusetts
19 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The shorter it is, the more well said it is."

This is good; I dig it. But you should work on the punctuation that comes after a line like a: comma, semicolon, period, ect.