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May 21, 2013
By GabrielMeroli GOLD, Sabana Grande, Other
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GabrielMeroli GOLD, Sabana Grande, Other
16 articles 5 photos 15 comments

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My love life is a mess; It's like a puzzle piece that doesn't fit no where. - by: Gabriel Meroli

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We are wild animals in this big world
Don't you think everything is strange for us?
Speaking without thinking makes our mind twirl.
Can we do something that will help change us?

In this life we’re here just a little time
People think that's a reason to be bad
We do a lot of things, even bad crimes
This is stupid and it makes me so mad


If we stop acting like little children
We will change and demonstrate we still can
We need to stop judging and be friends
Stop doing crazy things, create a plan

We fight as one, we'll be victorious
Never give up, we will be glorious.

© Anna B., Northville, MI

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Izzy777 SILVER said...
on May. 2 2015 at 10:40 am
Izzy777 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
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&quot;I always wonder why birds stay in one place when they can fly anywhere around the world. But then I ask myself the same question.&quot;

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This is so great. Oh my goodness, you'd love my poetry, I write about the SAME stuff. You're definitely going on my favorites.
chestac said...
on May. 28 2013 at 9:43 am
 Yey  we arewild animal,  nice poem my favorite, you have a lot of talent :D \(¤¤)/
GabrielMeroli GOLD said...
on May. 23 2013 at 5:15 pm
GabrielMeroli GOLD, Sabana Grande, Other
16 articles 5 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
My love life is a mess; It&#039;s like a puzzle piece that doesn&#039;t fit no where. - by: Gabriel Meroli

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Thank you! <3 okay, i'll check it. 
TanviKusum DIAMOND said...
on May. 23 2013 at 4:51 pm
TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
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All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers. <br /> Orison Swett Marden<br /> <br /> &quot;The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say.&quot; - Anais Nin<br /> <br /> we speak in hushed voices so as to not wake our memories

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hey I think you've done an amazing job in this poem. Keep writing! Check out some of my work too!
GabrielMeroli GOLD said...
on May. 23 2013 at 4:06 pm
GabrielMeroli GOLD, Sabana Grande, Other
16 articles 5 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
My love life is a mess; It&#039;s like a puzzle piece that doesn&#039;t fit no where. - by: Gabriel Meroli

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Thanks :') <3 I will! 
Fallen_ PLATINUM said...
on May. 23 2013 at 3:42 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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&quot; a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness&quot;

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so true and amazing i love the last stanza the most amazing keep it up
GabrielMeroli GOLD said...
on May. 23 2013 at 3:28 pm
GabrielMeroli GOLD, Sabana Grande, Other
16 articles 5 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
My love life is a mess; It&#039;s like a puzzle piece that doesn&#039;t fit no where. - by: Gabriel Meroli

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Thanks :') <3 I will check your writing! 
sarah98 BRONZE said...
on May. 23 2013 at 3:19 pm
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

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wow so true. i really liked this. Keep writing, and check out some of my writing??
Kary.Michelle. said...
on May. 22 2013 at 11:07 pm
Just gorgeous! <3
KaryMichelle said...
on May. 22 2013 at 10:53 pm
Just wonderful!