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Death is Upon Me

February 11, 2013
By Steel Humphry BRONZE, McArthur, California
Steel Humphry BRONZE, McArthur, California
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The tide is rolling in and time is short.
The enemy is coming very soon.
I still feel love for this old, ugly fort.
I peer to the east and hear the first boom.
I load my rifle and pray for the best.
The defining roar of war has begun.
The opposing soldiers wear bright red vests.
A friend tries to tell me it will be fun.
Bodies already litter the coast line.
The shots are true, the barrels are rifled.
A thought comes to my mind: it will be fine.
Then at that moment my thoughts were stifled.
All my friends around me stood petrified.
Because they watch me commit suicide.



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Pantagruel said...
on Feb. 20 2013 at 11:20 am
This is a very mature poem. I enjoy the imagery throughout, especially the rifled barrels and true aim, but the line with the most music is "The defining roar of war has begun".