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Vista of Moonlit Night

January 3, 2013
By Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

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After every interval of a fortnight,
The queen of night comes to address,
To preach love and cascade light,
The mysterious charisma; the white dress!

As the moonlight embraces everything,
The stars blush and put on veils.
Silently, the lake keeps on smiling,
With breeze, the perfume of night sails.

The nightingale, in praise of moon,
Begins chanting a soothing song,
The charming vista is a boon,
Surely, to nirvana, it belongs.

As the bright moonlit night leaves, the craving hearts say,
"Forever-long, wish the aura would stay this way."

© Steve S., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
I feel like I have fallen in love with moonlit night. The inspiration is obvious from the poem's title. I've composed it to inspire other hearts which are unaware of night's beauty - the bewitching beauty of the moonlit night!
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salt,life said...
on Jan. 10 2013 at 2:03 pm
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that was really good  im not much of a poem person but that was good!  
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2013 at 11:37 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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lovely feedback!
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2013 at 11:31 am
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I loved this poem so much. XD
Steven_Hyde GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2013 at 9:14 am
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This was one of the best poems I've ever read in my life, it was very well written you should be proud of your self!!!
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2013 at 8:18 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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Thanks for the encouragement
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2013 at 8:17 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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heart, it's only about nature and its beauty
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2013 at 8:16 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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thanks friend
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2013 at 8:15 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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thanks gg!
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2013 at 8:14 am
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thanks!!!!
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2013 at 8:13 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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thanks! glad to get comment
Songs_Along GOLD said...
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aww.....the poem is so enthralling!...just like d nightingale's soothing song...!...perfect choice of words...! :)
VaughnsWorld BRONZE said...
on Jan. 10 2013 at 1:21 am
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umm this my first time commenting ummm ummm how bout it needs help with the flow (crowed- boo boo) im sorry im sorry
Kill-switch_996 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 10 2013 at 1:21 am
Kill-switch_996 BRONZE, Bangalore, Other
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great poem and nice reciprocation of thought into rhyme..very well done.. :)
SiblingCoC BRONZE said...
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Wait so is this about someone getting married or the nature getting married?
theforgotenone GOLD said...
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its really good you should be proud
TrekkieFangirlForLife SILVER said...
on Jan. 9 2013 at 11:37 am
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love it...i really really do. now if only i can write about my love for it too.
SugarcoatIt BRONZE said...
on Jan. 8 2013 at 9:20 am
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This is one of those works which I felt like reading over again as soon as I finished it. Its beautiful how you explained your love for a moonlight night. Its simple yet has spark n connects...:) GR8 JOB!
lshem BRONZE said...
on Jan. 8 2013 at 12:41 am
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Beautiful.......absolutely beautiful<3
Mr.Poetman PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 12:35 pm
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I like your use of words but once again i dont particularly like it, not enough rhymimg for me. I know not all poetry has to flow great but that what i look for, but other than that it was a great write, very decriptive.
LittleStormWriterGG SILVER said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 12:17 pm
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Wow.. I think that is your best. Absolutely beautiful