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A Wrong Turn

March 11, 2012
By Swims.M.V. GOLD, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Swims.M.V. GOLD, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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&quot;If you&#039;re not practicing, somebody else is, somewhere, and he&#039;ll be ready to take your job.&quot;<br /> -Brooks Robinson

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I am washing away in the midst of a storm.

Drowning in a sea of crystal tears

Slowly being suffered from clean and fresh air.

Just as any girl I begin to mourn

Trying gracefully to steer

Through a fighting wind with care.

You parting as if it were a norm

Even though we had common years

I begin to think they were thin and bare.

You, in my eyes seemed to transform

But in spite of my fears

My love for you became aware

Your affection was only born

When looking for acceptance from your peers

You left with not even a fight, because you never cared.

The author's comments:
When you wonder if you've made the right decisions don't think they're mistakes they were just hard things to do. Never regret.
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ParadoxicalDreamer BRONZE said...
on Nov. 17 2012 at 7:00 am
ParadoxicalDreamer BRONZE, American Fork, Utah
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&ldquo;Our greatest fear is not that we are inadequate, but that we are powerful beyond measure. It is our light, not our darkness, that frightens us. We ask ourselves, who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, handsome, talented, and fabulous . . . Your playi

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Beautiful poem!  The composition of it all really had an affect on me. 
KateLynnLeigh BRONZE said...
on Mar. 13 2012 at 3:16 pm
KateLynnLeigh BRONZE, Farmersburg, Indiana
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I really like it, It kinda' speaks to me.