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Me and My Fury

March 7, 2012
By Horsegal BRONZE, X, Virginia
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Horses- We braid our tears into their mane and whisper our hopes into their ears ~Author unknown

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When your confused look up at the sky;
look up at the sky and ask yourself "why?"
As the fury dwells inside of you,
Its hard to think of a logical thing to do
I am angry, and so confused
I acted stupid; I feel so used
As I sit here and write how I feel
In my mind I am making a deal
Think of good and keep pursuing: What I should be doing
I every so angry at myself and my actions
And also at my personal reactions
But eventually I start to worry
What will happen to me and my fury?

© Helen H., San Antonio, TX

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This one was pretty bad, but I just thought I would post it to see what helpful comments people said so that I know where to improve.
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