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Wasted

February 19, 2010
By numbheart21 GOLD, Antipolo, Other
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It hurts to see you there, killing thyself
Mourning for the love that you failed to get
While she’s there, playing with your heart shelf
Not knowing, for her love, your life you bet
She’s the only girl you ever cared of
And the only girl you ever wished for
But as you care and wish she turned you off
So off you went to the hell galore
I wish I could ease the pain your feeling
Though I know your love, I’ll never receive
For whenever you see her you’re trembling
Wanting to touch her yet you know she’ll leave
Erasing her from your mind is easy
But from your heart is another story

The author's comments:
the character is a girl who loves a man who lost his girlfriend. The character has never been anything except the mans friend. She tries to comfort him but it does no good. He is very hurt and that in turn hurts the character. To love someone and they cant see; is very hard to deal with. He is too upset right now and if she told him; he might break off the friendship. She is in a no win situation. this story was one of my frieds' experience. it inspired me to write this one..:)
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