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This Isn't Love

January 16, 2010
By Vilhelm GOLD, Elk River, Minnesota
Vilhelm GOLD, Elk River, Minnesota
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I can't work with these people. I'm going to my locker room!


This isn't love
The looks and the lies
As my emotions struggle to hide
And I look for somewhere to confide
And my soul becomes constricted and tied.

This isn't love
When you only care about you
Don't see my life through
Forgetting something old, something new
And the way you felt when you said 'I do'.

This isn't love
Your scorn and your pain
Becoming the object of my shame
Confuses my emotions and drives me insane
And calls the storms with beating rain.

This isn't love
The promises you break
Worried about your own life's sake
Not seeing this ugly monster you make
Or seeing that your life is all very fake.

This isn't love
What you've done to my life
Sowing not hope but trouble and strife
When you don't love your kids or wife
And kill me slowly with your twisting, selfish knife.

This isn't love.



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on Feb. 4 2010 at 7:36 pm
pyropoet DIAMOND, Zimmerman, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
You are NEVER alone in your troubles - there is someone who is always willing to lend a hand or a shoulder to you.
-L. Kimpton

im really sorry, vilhelm. i just wanna say that i know how it feels to know that someone isn't really "loving" you. i'll pray for you, vilhelm, so hard. don't be afraid to talk to me about anything - i'm open to anything you have to say.

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on Jan. 30 2010 at 1:09 pm
Jacee007 GOLD, Westland, Michigan
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Today is the Tomorrow you were worrying about Yesterday. The journey of a lifetime begins with one single step. Negativity is the downfall of dreams. It's not the quantity of friends that matters it's the quality.

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Jacee007 GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2010 at 1:08 pm
Jacee007 GOLD, Westland, Michigan
13 articles 6 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Today is the Tomorrow you were worrying about Yesterday. The journey of a lifetime begins with one single step. Negativity is the downfall of dreams. It's not the quantity of friends that matters it's the quality.

Wow I love the unique flow n rhyme